When it goes into the psyche I would blame the relationship going astry on the husband. When the nanny enters the room the wife does look extremely depressed, and during the dinner the husband looked bored. Once the cat ran out with the head the husband made her go get it as though it was all her fault and her responsibility In that sense he is at the least verbally abusive. And in that time period, women didn't really get their say in things, they were controlled by their man. She was fed up and wanted more and obviously the mutant looking thingy had that and it swept her away with just a pleasant dance. Ya completely the husband's fault.
There are things that may be overlooked by some that brings out more detail in the story. If you're going for it again with a new story, try and make these little details stand out a bit more. Good work though!
Doesn't have to be for voice acting, can also be for recording songs as well. Rather than rugs for the floor I have clothes, I never would have thought that it would help though! For the walls you can also use egg cartons which can work similarly to acoustic foam. I'm saving up my egg cartons for sure.
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This is funny BUT
This isn't funny, it's hilarious, and I like how there's actually some plot going on now.
The thing I don't like about this is that after having the learning experience of a lifetime that those kids had in the magic school bus, they wouldn't have gone absolutely retarded. Sure they could have the personalities portrayed in the flash but they could also have passed that math test.
Keep making more, they're funny!
Just like any other stick movie
Given, it's good, for a stick movie, the teleportation effect was decent.
BUT it was just like any other stick movie out there. I would say work on that.
THAT and the physics seemed kind of unrealistic.
Work on those and you should be good.
but what i wanna do is first i wanna be able to make good stick movies then i'll move on to other stuff
I couldn't even get into the first minute of it: Here's why.
1) It was just a bunch of random shit (see 2) squiggling and moving around the screen at incredibly fast rates.
2) The colour brown made it look like a bunch of shit was being splashed around everywhere.
If splashing pieces of shit around to get a picture of a room or a person or just a bunch of lines moving around is YOUR idea of art, then you need a reality check.
SO in order to attempt to help, I will offer what I can, the solutions are pretty simple:
1) DON'T USE BROWN WHEN DOING SOMETHING LIKE THIS, maybe green or black, or even blue... Let's go blue because it has a water effect and would make this much more pleasant to watch.
2) Stop with the squiggles. Allow something to be watchable, you can use the squiggles here and there in order to give an effect of something. Just don't throw it all over the screen saying it means something.
3) When I clicked this, I was thinking of a short involving a couple drunk guys walking/driving/what have you whilst drinking booze. Make the title relevant.
Hope this helps.
Good for starting, but not for NG.
Good motion, the movie didn't go by ridiculously fast, it's good. But to my standards, it's not good for NG, just yet. Add more backround, make the movie a slight bit longer, and you should be good to go.
If this does get past and onto the portal, congratulations, the majority thought this movie is good enough for NG.
Remember, Practice makes perfect.
The music Legacy!
This is brilliant! The perfect music story!
I have nothing much else to say, it's just amazing
First Flash, eh?
That's pretty good for a first one. Could use alot of working on though. But you should already know that.
It was very informational. That's all I have to say.
Lots to work on...
First off, the movie's off sync.
second, you have good colouring in the animation, but not much is going on
third, the storyline, I guess. Not only could I not understand a thing in the movie, but I couldn't follow the storyline.
da story is abut 1 tym wen Edwart found nasty milkies in a frige and jacop dranked dem for him 2 proof his luv and den me originul character Darknight Violet Darkness Ravenclaw (who is a bootiful Japanese dickgrl vampyre) cums out of da milks and we had a orgies. now dat u no dat i fink u shud wach it agin and u well C mai troo genis.
Repetitive Noises hurt my brain
Next time you make a flash, make sure the audio you use doesn't repeat itself, keep using different ones without a millisecond pause in between.
Funny flash though, make sure you keep working to make your flashes better!
Yeah, the repetative scremas kinda pissed me off aswell, but its hard to find a huge selection of male screams that sound alike unless your using a mic.
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