Pure-Metal-UTA's Reviews

[The Pig's Head]

When it goes into the psyche I would blame the relationship going astry on the husband. When the nanny enters the room the wife does look extremely depressed, and during the dinner the husband looked bored. Once the cat ran out with the head the husband made her go get it as though it was all her fault and her responsibility In that sense he is at the least verbally abusive. And in that time period, women didn't really get their say in things, they were controlled by their man. She was fed up and wanted more and obviously the mutant looking thingy had that and it swept her away with just a pleasant dance. Ya completely the husband's fault.
There are things that may be overlooked by some that brings out more detail in the story. If you're going for it again with a new story, try and make these little details stand out a bit more. Good work though!

[VO Home Studio : Space]

Doesn't have to be for voice acting, can also be for recording songs as well. Rather than rugs for the floor I have clothes, I never would have thought that it would help though! For the walls you can also use egg cartons which can work similarly to acoustic foam. I'm saving up my egg cartons for sure.
Nice info! Fave'd

[Magic School Bus: ep3]

This is funny BUT

This isn't funny, it's hilarious, and I like how there's actually some plot going on now.
The thing I don't like about this is that after having the learning experience of a lifetime that those kids had in the magic school bus, they wouldn't have gone absolutely retarded. Sure they could have the personalities portrayed in the flash but they could also have passed that math test.
Keep making more, they're funny!

[Talk Head]

That made my day, thank you very much!

TomFulp responds:

Thanks for giving it a whirl!

[The Sound Walk]

Horrible controls

The concept's neat, but I have issues getting past the first stage even on easy. The time you're supposed to hit and the song itself is extremely off. And once you take too many hits and the music starts to die down, it's nearly impossible to get back on track because you have no rythm to follow.
Now where can I turn off the FX to try and make it run faster? I don't see it, so then how can I make this work?
Fix this, please! It looks like a fun game to play, but the shitty controls ruin it.

[Suit-Able]

Good concept!

Few things that lost that 10th point:
1) Glitches everywhere, after level 4 I got stuck where I was supposed to be squished: I went to the gate behind me and was able to stand up. Couldn't get to where I needed to go. So I restarted it
2) The boss monster thing you have to groundpound and such was really hard to get him in the right places.
If that monster thing was the last boss, then it was relatively short, oh and I didn't find all the codes. Which leads me to assume that it's not the last boss.
Either way, fix the bugs and you should be good to go as it is. Maybe make that boss easier.

[-Above It All-(Feat. BMI)]

Fucking great! I couldn't say anything to help improve it. Awesome work!

Back-From-Purgatory responds:

Thanks!
\m/

[Demo Tape]

I really dig it! The only critisism I have to offer is that your vocals are standing out way too much. If you haven`t already put a compressor on there, and maybe turn it down by 1-2 dB.
Can`t wait to hear the final take!
\m/

Blackowtt responds:

Thanks for the review, helpful critisism is always accepted :) yeah, i do agree, i will in fact put a compressor ive been wanting to. Yeah the mixing of it all was a bit harsh, but i think ill be able to fix it :) Working hard on the final product, it will be nothing short of absolutly AMAZING, i promise!
As for the compressors, what do you recommend? Anything?
ALSO i have TWO versions of this demo, the other one soundsa bit better with the vox, its not as "emphasized" as this one, which is better suppose :P

Thanks! \m/

[Satan Ist Krieg]

Haven't heard 80's-90's black

At least not like the quality you mentioned (if I even have before)
Honestly though, I see potential in this song, I'd like to see this longer and with better production.

seel responds:

Thanks, yeah the production was intentionally bad, I was actually going to remake it with better quality and make it longer but never got around to doing that.
If you want to hear some 80s black, youtube Immortal blashyrkh, and call of the wintermoon, silly gaylords ensued. Contrary to popular belief it's actually harder than one might think to get down to their level of shitty production without it just sounding like noise though.